Wednesday, March 25, 2015

my art

Create a 3D space and objects using our knowledge of 2d shapes
my art
my art is very hard to make 

Sunday, March 22, 2015

story telling

I did well on my story because I yosed sound effect a lot 

I did not do well no my action because I did not do much moving 

GO TO THE Marae it's FUN


Thursday, March 12, 2015

Welcome to Angus' Blog

- welcome to our blog!
- show pictures of some of your learning (butterflies etc.)
- who are you friends?
- things you like (paper planes!)
- places we like to play
- 45seconds
-the people are my frends 😎 

what i did well?
my photos📷
camera 📷

Wednesday, March 4, 2015

Witting sample


Purpose: To describe an interesting character so we can tell a story about them at the Marae stay.

WALT: Entertain (character description)


Think of a character you could write about.

Draw them.  

Introduce your character in an entertaining way.

Describe their looks.  

Describe their personality.  

I think/feel statement (Conclusion / Summary)

Criteria: I can

Self Assessment

Descriptive vocabulary (words that help to SHOW the reader)

  • use a range of verbs

Language features (phrases that help paint a picture)

  • select one or two similes

  • use onomatopoeia to show sounds

  • select words that start with the same sound (alliteration)

My writing is 2-3 paragraphs (100 - 200 words)

Learning Partner Comment

Feedback:  i love the looks.

Feedforward: fouceson your verbs.


Overall, how well do you think your leaning partner has done good  

Godzilla 2.                                                                                                                  

Godzilla is tough but not tough enough.
Godzilla is to strong for the bad guys.
He has a flaming tail of steel and the skin of a dragon.
He has titanium spicks and raiser shap teeth.
His feet are as big as a school bus.
He can breathe out hot hot lava.
He loves fitting bad guy's. 
The bad guy's always die 'ha 'ha' ha.
He is sad that he has no family 
I'm glad that Godzilla is strong but some poeple think that he is a menist but he's a GOOD GUY